simbrian's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wally World]

I know what you mean

Good point, and a decent flash. Good job man.

[Christmas Pill]

lolz^59862

The animation style wasn't to my liking, but the joke made up for that. I don't understand how santa taking the pills gave the reindeer a boost. It would have been better if they had needles sticking out of them.

Great job though. A fine laugh!

[Little Aviator]

interesting

A few things bugged me though. (by the way pvt-blasto wrote a superb review a few below me)

-no christmas tree
-he wasn't nice to his dad
-I was expecting a scene showing him as a pilot before he has a flashback
-That looked like a bomber... as far as I know there were no female pilots in either of the world wars.
-animation was nice though
-I liked the voices

And that's it. Good work, but the story needs more thought next time. Perhaps even discussion with a few deep-thinkers before you start working on anything.

KartuneHustla responds:

There was a christmas tree
He said thanks dad i love you
it wasnt a bomber, shes just a female aviator and there were female aviators at that time period (few but they were there)

Good little review. And yes, pvt-blasto's review is the best negative review so far. May be negative, but its good nonetheless.

[Coffee Talk]

very funny

But I got impatient with the slow pace at the beginning - I read your intro half a dozen times before it changed. And the thought bubbles were too slow appearing as well. But other than that it was great. I'm sure you will get a good mark on this.

[Organ Donor]

I liked it

Great idea, and good animation.

The main problem is the lack of color, because I found it difficult to tell the difference between some of the characters. When he was being shot at in the beginning it also looks like he got hit each time.

Please keep up the great work. Ignore the haters.

[Robotic Octopus Snowman]

not bad

I was disappointed that it was so short though. I loved the animation quality. Didn't like how santa suddenly shrunk when the thing was eating him.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

he didnt shrink
it grew!
not at the start it was snowman sized, then when it found him it was about as big as a giraffe

[These Pancakes Are Tiny]

One tight little bundle of awesomeness.

Voices - Awesome.
Animation - Superb
Humour - Excellent

Score - Perfect

Since nothing's perfect, here's a tiny flaw I found: The guy would have burned his finger pouring the coffee like that. I would know. So that brings your score down by 0.00034%. Still equals perfect though.

[a little animation <3]

Beautiful

Great animation, loved your style. Short and concise, just the way I like it.

Keep up the good work.

[Prime Minister Address]

Uhmm...

-music too loud, voice too soft
-Didn't make a whole lot of sense
-I found myself saying "ok..." when *I think* you wanted me to laugh
-artwork is alright. That earned you those three stars

Better luck next time.