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[NeWbIe Stick Fight]

Not bat at all

That looks remarkably good for your first animation. It's a little fast though.

cherub-down responds:

lol all the stick fights i watch are fast :)

[The Transformer]

awesome

Autobots sure have come a long way over the years. Great job man.

I second the "get back to work on Tankmen" friendly suggestion :)

JohnnyUtah responds:

will do

[Spoof of the Colossus]

sweet

that was really funny, great job man. The subtitles were a good addition when I couldn't always understand what they were saying.

doctormario responds:

Thanks a lot.

Yeah that's a major complaint of flash movies, especially by people in countries where English is not the majority language. :)

[Earth Hour]

good message

Earth hour is important. It's to show that we do care and we can make a difference.

I personally think it's stupid that we only make an attempt to save energy for one hour out of the whole year but that's life.

Nice animation. It was funny. I don't understand why Mother nature has a man voice though.

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

;).

[Tomm-E]

very cool

Funny, nicely-animated, great all-around.

Though I REALLY expected to see some sort of sentry turret to blam the red guy's garbage animations while the blue guy's is safely escorted through. Oh well.

MarcyVF responds:

Yeah, you needed action :P Thanks.

[Zone of the Awesome]

awesome

The best part is the sound effects you did yourself. Hilarious.

Problem: The speech volume levels seemed to fluctuate a bit. Some things I could hear fine while others I didn't quite catch.

Animation was all great.

Awesome work man.

Galneda responds:

Hmm, I never noticed the fluctuation...I only kinda sulked about the quality. I'll be sure to keep an ear out for that in the future. Thank you!

[Once at the Lesson]

great animation, a little confusing

What I got from this is that you had a hard time getting to class each day. A little confusing, but great animation. After the fifth guy or so I started to get bored so I closed it. If you do something like this in the future have another guy start before the current one finishes so it's non-stop action to keep our short attention spans occupied. I also loved how you had a picture in the background and you worked from that.

trul responds:

10x 4 review
what exactly u have found confusing?
I think if there will be two guys at the same time on the screen u won't be able to follow their movements.

[Little Aviator]

interesting

A few things bugged me though. (by the way pvt-blasto wrote a superb review a few below me)

-no christmas tree
-he wasn't nice to his dad
-I was expecting a scene showing him as a pilot before he has a flashback
-That looked like a bomber... as far as I know there were no female pilots in either of the world wars.
-animation was nice though
-I liked the voices

And that's it. Good work, but the story needs more thought next time. Perhaps even discussion with a few deep-thinkers before you start working on anything.

KartuneHustla responds:

There was a christmas tree
He said thanks dad i love you
it wasnt a bomber, shes just a female aviator and there were female aviators at that time period (few but they were there)

Good little review. And yes, pvt-blasto's review is the best negative review so far. May be negative, but its good nonetheless.

[Robotic Octopus Snowman]

not bad

I was disappointed that it was so short though. I loved the animation quality. Didn't like how santa suddenly shrunk when the thing was eating him.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

he didnt shrink
it grew!
not at the start it was snowman sized, then when it found him it was about as big as a giraffe